Machinima Review Issue One

Alright, so MissHarlequin and I have worked a little on the Machinima Review for the First Issue. If you guys would like to look over it and tell us what you think--what we can improve on, what was confusing, 'berrified words' that could been changed/improved, things that we've missed out on or that you wish you would have seen(!!)or anything else you can think of, feel free to edit away! We're super open to your guys' opinions It's obviously not finished. We need a closing thing, so if you guys have any suggestions as to how to close it, feel free to pipe in

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Ahhh! Loved it! Very funny! :3

If you guys want, when pictures are taken and the like I can put it together :p

Thanks Is there anything you'd change or like to see that isn't in there?