Issue one Adverts

Ok here is the first of the adverts I've worked up. Comments? Suggestions??

Second possible ad.

Fwah! They look great!! Man, I'm so excited to be a part of this magazine. We have so much talent here

I love love love the background of the first one and the bottom part where it has the logo and the Make Every Moment Magical The only suggestion I have is that, at first glance, I couldn't tell what it was advertising and they don't look very intimate. Maybe instead, it could be closer to a head shot, Like maybe with his head around her neck... [pause] ... okay, I found this picture in one of my old Cosmos ( ). I just took a picture with my phone, so disregard the quality.... And the sundaes... haha.
https://2img.net/h/i739.photobucket.com/albums/xx33/kyrstena15/0303111056.jpg

For the second one, maybe you could have one side that's completely black and white with a sad girl, then the "Color your life eyeshadow" slogan thing like you have it, and then the other side be a colorful Berry with insanely colorful eyeshadow. That way, you can still see the eyeshadow without having the model half-blinking. I don't even know if that would be a good idea, haha, but it might inspire a little more of the 'color' side of the advertisement. Here are a couple pictures I found that kind of shows what I'm talking about
https://2img.net/h/i739.photobucket.com/albums/xx33/kyrstena15/0303111115.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i739.photobucket.com/albums/xx33/kyrstena15/0303111114-1.jpg
https://2img.net/h/i739.photobucket.com/albums/xx33/kyrstena15/0303111120.jpg

Feel free to completely disregard all of my comments, too! I know that I love A LOT of feedback for my work, and I can never tell if other people do or not. I think both photos are gorgeous as is, too, so if they were to stay the same as you have them now, I think they'd be perfect for the magazine

Ooh, both very very cute!